March 7, 2004
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in the dream
a child and I are destroying a piece of tagboard
he needs for a project
covering it with cartoony images
but only one side
aware on some level
the devastation must not be total
knowing there is another woman
he cares for
(though she will not be spared)
and wishing he would die
so much anger
with no place to go
it holds me in the warm bed
as I watch the steel elephants advance on my window
in the dali-desert sky
Comments (15)
sometimes pain is really beautiful. seems kind of stupid, doesn’t it?
much love
My finger tips are melting into the keyboard, the dali-scape was very powerful.
smooches, doll.
im thinking.
im thinking.
one meaning to many.
and so much depth.
pisceans.
sigh.
((((((((((HUGS!))))))))))
Beautiful imagery.
-M
No words, just love. XOXOXOXM
Stop causing me to empathize through poetry. I’m not supposed to get poetry. Big hugs . . . I don’t know what else to tell you, it’s such a personal experience.
This is more than a batting cage can channel…
i could ask you a zillion questions about this piece; however, i won’t be intrusive {now THERE’S a shocker, lol}. i’ll just say that i feel ya, dudess.
mwah
Park your elephants in your nice new house that is just specially for you. Teach them to behave themselves nicely. You can do it. Your the mother.
hugs
hes a shit (and sadly mistaken) to think he has better than you. you will wake up and be glad this happened as everything has changed for the better. better than you ever imagined.
Hugs to you satori-san.